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2006-05-29 [Kaimee]: stream of consciousness vel? :P And the limit is set to 800 because I wanted short stories. Part of the challenge of writing short stories is learning how to impart the information within the word limit :P Mwaha. Suffer >:P
2006-05-29 [Veltzeh]: Yeah, stream of consciousness!
2006-05-29 [Veltzeh]: Hopefully its okay that I have the overview and the extra bits there...
2006-05-30 [Po]: Kaimee is a cruel story mistress...*is busy piecing together her 'account of reality'* *loves on Kaimee*
2006-05-30 [Kaimee]: My likes extra story bits, it's the same background and additional thoughts I could get by talking to you, so I don't mind those additional bits not counted in word limit. ^^ Oh, and if anyone wants any critique or comments or help editing from me before judging just ask :) I do not count this as cheating, and by no means change something simply to suit me. It's just good to polish things up as much as possible before they're judged :)
2006-05-30 [Kaimee]: *Loves on Posies*
2006-05-30 [Veltzeh]: Well... is my story TOO much like a laboratory report? ;)
2006-05-30 [Kaimee]: Well, it reads like an essay (literary composition showing author's personal reflection on topic), rather than a short story, but I haven't really given you guidelines saying not to go that way, so I'm hardly going to judge you harshly for having done it ;)
2006-05-30 [Veltzeh]: Yay. :)
2006-05-30 [Athilea]: I would love some critique on my entry before it's judged. I think I did an alright job. . .considering how much there is to really tell about that situation. But I would still love the suggestions. ^_^
2006-05-30 [Calliope]: If you have time feel free to critique mine but don't go out of your way.
2006-06-02 [Po]: Hee, I have a new nickname! *loves on the nickname 'Posies'* :D
2006-06-04 [Kaimee]: Critiques shall be done once I've had some sleep, and lady, do you remember the nursery rhyme? "Ring around a rosy, a pocket full of posies.." Get in my pocket! :O
2006-06-05 [Winkx]: Tehee. I like it Po! Butt dosen't have a dark side? *looks at last comment* That song came from the rise of the Balck Death...yikes!
2006-06-06 [Athilea]: Yerp, it did. I often wonder how many other people actually know where that little childrens rhyme originated. I'm Not The Only One!!! *cheers*
2006-06-06 [Kaimee]: I think lots of people know it now ;)
2006-06-06 [Winkx]: Maybe where you're from, but I'm in 10th /11th grade and only me and my friend knew. We got 10 extra points on our finals for telling on history teacher that.
2006-06-06 [Athilea]: Yep. That's what watching a lot of the history channel, and listining to a father that seems to know everything there is to know about history, does for you. ^_^ Teh-heh
2006-06-06 [Winkx]: Nope....DISCOV
2006-06-06 [Kiddalee]: I think I learned it from my sister or a classmate.
2006-06-07 [Athilea]: Yeas. . .that's a goooood channel. Yeah, I hear a lot of what I know from my father, the learn somethin' channel guru (I can't spell). Yeah, we call all those learning the learn something channels.
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